Wednesday, February 26, 2020

Writing assignment

Write a scene of 250-350 words featuring a character with one concrete want (a table, a moose, a toothbrush, anything physical is fine!) and one weakness. Set up the story where every other sentence is a rising action. Use one word from the following list of twelve words in each sentence that has a rising action. In other words: Write your first sentence introducing your character. Make the next sentence a rising action using one of the following twelve words. Write your third sentence, which may introduce the weakness, then write your fourth sentence with a rising action that includes one of the remaining eleven words you haven’t used. And so on.
  • trick
  • memory
  • aboard
  • tiger
  • pretend
  • carrot
  • appliance
  • cage
  • rings
  • crow
  • filthy
  • explode
Use at least 6 of the 12 words, but challenge yourself to use as many of the words as possible while still meeting the word count.

(344 word count, I implemented all words from the list except appliance.)


She’s a young woman going about her day of activity. For a moment, a memory flutters through her mind about a man she once knew. He was charming and attentive. They had exchanged rings and said vows in front of family and friends. She had been so happy then.

She imagines stepping aboard the ship where they spent their honeymoon, preparing to sail away in search of the sunset. Closing her eyes, she can hear seagulls, feel sun on her face, smell salt in the air, and feel his arms holding her. These pretend moments usually make her feel more despondent, yet she tries to hang on to it, and fails. He is gone now.

She has a vague sense of being filthy and grimy, but she isn’t too concerned about it. She sees a shape in the corner by the door. It looks like a carrot. Interested she moves from the edge of the darkened room, toward the corner. Sometimes there is a trick hidden in little finds like this, and she does her best to be cautious, but a carrot would be a wonderful treat and it makes her eager. It’s easier to move around quietly now than it had been for her at first and she makes no sound as her bare feet move over the packed earth toward her potential prize.

A crow makes a noise outside and she spies it, as she stands on tiptoe, through the small window. It is sitting in its usual place on the fence where it will remain for a time, she knows, before flying away looking for grander adventure; it’s a regular visitor. She’s looking back to the corner for the prospective delicacy when a door slams above and she explodes from her trance, jolted into action.

Eclipsed by a tide of anger and terror, her interest in treats flee her thoughts. She runs to the far side of the room, crouches, tiger-like, and hugs her knees to her chest. This might be her chance. Any moment now the cage door will open.